blog#7

Part 1

This week in the writing center internship one person came in needing help with grammar, English was their second language so a lot of the sentences were backwards or mildly out of place kind of how yota from star wars spoke. Also helped them with past and present tense. along with conecting sentecnces.

Part 2

As an audience member for the next writing project I like animals but don’t own any myself and am more of a dog person over cats. The current media materials I found to be most effective are the digital media like face book and twitter because everyone seems to be glued to their computer or smart phone these days . some places for revision could be radio or television or actual people and animals fundraising out in public. Some questions that could be asked, who is main audience? What is the main message you want to convey? The thing I hope to get out of this is to widen my writing experience because mostly my writing has been for school papers or projects.

Part 3

Chapter six talks about making connections in your writing; so that a paper will flow and connect to the previous sentence. Otherwise a paragraph is just a jumbled mass of sentences. If a paragraph is torn apart it should be able to be put back together in order, from the use of those connections between sentences. This is important in writing because unlike speaking; the reader of a piece of writing cant ask questions to fill in the gaps.

For this week’s revision I chose to focus on the use of colons and semi colons