Thursday, March 28, 2013

blog#11

this week for the writting internship we looked at a paper for a ploy sciencence class on the iraq war. thier was alot of gramer issues and puntuation errors. the only thing that needed to be fixed structure wise was putting the thesis in the first paragraph becouse it was located deeper in the paper originaly.



part 2

Our Brief History

Georgia Martinell, founder, worked for several years in animal shelters and private veterinary clinics all over the West Coast.  In 2006, she moved to a rural Northern Idaho town and realized a  need for action:  With no other animal rescue groups in the immediate area, the stray population was large and people had nowhere to go for low-cost spaying and neutering services.  
A[BB1]  Board of Directors was formed and Second Chance Animal, Inc. was made into a legitimate 501 (c) 3 non-profit organization[BB2] . .
To date we have helped more than 560 animals in need, supplied over 55 dog houses to those with no shelter.  We have given away thousands of pounds of kibble to hungry pets.  This was all done in the last 3 years with less than 20 volunteers[BB3] [BB4] .

From second chance animal web site with some revision


About Us[BB5] 

Second Chance Animal, Inc.  committed to promoting the humane treatment of animals, preventing animal cruelty, and ending over-p[BB6] opulation of domestic pets . We’re striving to reach this goal by educating the public on the importance of responsible pet ownership and preventing the next generation of homeless pets.

EVERY animal deserves a good life and a loving home. With the support of the community, we have already helped thousands [BB7] of pets in our local area. We hope, with continued support, we will be able to grow and fight for all [BB8]  animals.

Our mission is to improve the lives of all animals[BB9] , end domestic pet  over-population, have an aggressive spay/neuter program, and compassionate stewardship of resources[BB10] .

We depend on volunteers and donations to maintain our funding and help us end animal suffering.


2 comments:

  1. I like the changes you made to the works on the website. It will really work well in the tri-fold, since the objective of it would be to educate people about Second Chance Animal quickly and easily

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  2. It looks like you broke it down from the website. This will really help it fit in the tri-fold and make it more to the point rather than having to read a full page worth of information. Looks good.

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